Advice from a magazine writing course that I wished I followed more closely:
–Strip sentences to their simplest components
–clear thinking becomes clear writing (no hope for muddle-headed me, then;)
–Constantly ask, “What am I trying to say?” and continue to ask this as you write
–thinking clearly is a conscious act that writers must force on themselves
I believe those are all excerpts from On Writing Well, by William Zinsser.
It was pissing rain this morning but now only the thick gray clouds. Light on the top, dark on the bottom as though the colour had settled at the bottom like a glass of juice. I’m not going to lie to you, I am not pleased. Please come back sun! Bad weather makes me grumpy, but not anguished, the least conducive mood to writing.
Exercises:
1. Write about nature. Include the following words: hard drive, stapler, phone, car, billboard. (Ooooh, you could use them as metaphors for things in nature!)
2. The most beautiful smile I ever saw…
3. My body (not my body!)…
Ok, feeling a little more creative now. I’m going to sink my teeth into my body…er…